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Old 01-04-2018, 02:37 PM   #12
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Originally Posted by Orc View Post
Trust me. The pen is subtle BUT the trigger is hair fine
Fuck kids rebuttals; maaan this the Teutul's... all my Choppers get Air Time/

Ok, smooth flow and transition into a punch. Its too generic though.

Don't dropa verse. Even retorting is sad
Maaan you're just taking Shots in the Dark like Ghost1 recording the Mag/

I liked this one,

Act like u ain't gay. Pftttt this bum is a simpleton,
When there's mooore Balls in Hawkeye than a WHOLE Summer at Wimbledon/

Alright could've set this up a bit better.

That expose shit was pathetic, can't believe u took the time
U've written more Gunplay lines this week than the careers of Cred & Hush combined/

Dope

.. U wake beside a Hog like 'why should I stay witchu?!'
Damn. U got a Fat Wife Problem that's got nothing to do with Copy & Paste issues/

Nah

H the Savagest Squad? Nah the barks bouta Hammer is talk
Cuz how ya 'whole team Road Warriors' if you've NEVER been an Animal, Hawk?!/

Fire, always good to see a good wrestling flip.

I couldn't smash ya girl. That's a curse I can't help with.
It's foul... she got Red Blotches all up the Back muchhh worse than that Zelph pic/

Cool

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Originally Posted by Hawk View Post
Anyone with ya genes done, toss Gunplay the addy he got a green thumb
He’ll have Orc Kids deflowered, snap a pic, n leave his screen cummed

Yeah orchard is a bit overdone on him. I dont like the actual punch either. Reads awkwardly for me.

I’m mean son, type to knock ya nan out her favorite rocker
Don’t wanna see her Top roll? Best tell ur bae ta block ‘er

I like this one, WP.

Somethin like 80 choppers, they say you GOAT, think they meant a lamb
Ya betta scram, I’ve been rappin’ circles around stars like a pentagram

Could've set this up better to relate to pentagram, its light.

If I said it, I meant it fam, I’m here to feast n I expect a blowout
Roll up to his hoe’s house, more shells on the floor than Texas Roadhouse

alright

Grab techs n roll out, or run the fade… E Honda w/ the hands you can’t see me
Beat me? Punches bang til’ you get the picture like an old ass TV

Nah

No homo bro bro, but I came here to run through dicks like a catheter
Orc sliding down the wall like a bannister once I dump two clips from the passenger

Eh

No guns where this bums from, but desi hollows N I has to chill
When I’m done, dunno what’s real or not... find a semi auto by a graphic kill
Eh

I got orc winning, seen better from both.

v/Orc
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