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Old 01-02-2018, 09:34 AM   #10
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Originally Posted by Cred View Post
Copy my style? Then really act is if u’ll win?!
Bitch I’m HIM! Gun bar king shooting Aero 1st like an Indian

^^^ I feel like this was kind of a waste punch. I really liked the punch but the setup and everything was boring

I’ll pop ur baby in the air like u tryna find out the new gender
To clever. Find where relatives live n Pop ur Mom like Bruce Jenner

^^^ the word "new" threw me off in the setup. Seemed a bit forced since a gender reveal party isn't the "new" gender, it's just the gender. Punch was fire though.

Heat’ll turn ur toupee to a slick perm. Drum wit the grips firm
Catchem on a Friday n put 50 rounds to his head like Big Worm

^^^ Fucked with this. Dope

I’m a killa @ short bar nigga but in real life I’ll let the pump spray 1st
Long 22 in ur face got this shit looking like a @Gunplay verse

^^^ Nasty (It's still fuck @Gunplay for life though)

A menace to society. Wit the 40 I’m O-Dog I like drama
Shoot this Chinese bitch in his face like.. “Whatchu say bout my momma?!”

^^^ lmao nice closer




Overall - A couple of the setups left me wanting more, but the punches typically made up for them. No real misses, and a couple dope hits.


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Originally Posted by Aero View Post
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December 25th

Aero in your house, barrel in your mouth like "these gifts are for me"
I blow with the gun, pole on your tongue, this is your Christmas story

^^^ This felt too... busy... not sure what blow with the gun means. To me it reads as if you're a bad shot. The "pole on your tongue/christmas story" party was fire even though I've never heard a barrel called a pole. (Unless you're talking about a blow gun, which is weird)

I do damage with new ammo, rapid fire leave dudes rattled
My guns bark - they bruise marrow, your guns barc - they lose battles

^^^ Deaddddddddddddddddd LOTB so far

Cant hide - bullets break down walls, doors, you appear & I melt you
Funny, I'm dropping everything to see you without clearing my schedule

^^^ dope

my gun paints a masterpiece, a live body diminishes nothing
A firm hand over your nose and mouth for 8 mins, I call that the finishing touches

^^^ Meh. Not bad but could have been executed a bit better

Heard you sell drugs, with the desert eagle I'm getting to him
I pull up with weight on the line that's a machine assist at the gym

^^^ Not really feeling this

Overall - You had a couple really nasty lines, including imo the LOTB. But you also missed a couple. You always lead into the punch well and then it kind of fell flat.



I think Aero's haymakers were meaner than Cred's, but Cred never really missed. Pretty close but have to go with Cred for having a consistent verse all the way through.
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