[Hawk]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

aka Patrick

ur verses annoy. no one's ever asked Swerve for a pointer
I spit lines that ppl go 'ohh' for.. while U go 0-4 since '04 vs Destroyer

^^^ I like this. No outstanding creativity or haymaker punch but it's a nice jab with a lot of sauce on the flow.

ur mom says ur obvi' a clown. proly the town jesta
even ur own Sicily View to die, and ima toss ya body in Mount Etna

^^^ I liked this but I think the wording got in the way. To me wordplay has to work both ways you read it and the Sicily version doesn't read that smooth "your own Sicily view to die" what does that mean? I think it still has impact and connected, would have just liked to see it worded to work both ways better.

it'll be a bumpy ride as i switch vans. im a sick man/hostage driver ..
bitches like u leave claw marks all over my Trunks -Chris Benoit's attire

^^^ I like this

if the trigger move, there aint a single dude the metal fears
ima put that Long Nose to ur head & Finish u. Geppetto's here

^^^ Fire.

then put a Clearcoat on ya coffin to brighten the paint up...
U'll put a Clearcoat on too, and roc it all night at a gay club

^^^ Typically I don't rock with bars that just call people gay but this killed me

wanna go 10, pat? naaa. even 12 is for softy fags
im goin Max, Pacioretty? u'll get carried out in a hockey bag

^^^ Pretty good

go off urself. i want the belt n tbh, well im a guy feared
diss for Dispatcher gonna have to call ALL the help to survive here

^^^ I fuck with this. Solid.

ur a novice guy. even ur hottest line isn't felt, kid
plus i could Wing this verse knowing ur too occupied w. the zelph vid

^^^ Between the lenox face tat and the video I figured it would create a lot of content. But I think this is the last battle for me to vote on so it's almost kind of tired at this point. Not your fault, it was a funny bar and good closer.

NO ext

You have a good flow to your verse. Allows you to read it all the way through and not just couplet by couplet. Had a couple super dope bars and a couple that were very creative but fell a hair short on execution. Overall a solid verse that I enjoyed.

Originally Posted by Swerve

I'm not you Barc, not pulling up shit archived and stored,
But you went 16?!?!? Great...now how many of those lines are yours?

^^^ Pretty simple biting bar. Nothing too hard or creative

You got your old ass beat, there's not much to do son,
Last week, Credenza antique...this week I smash you through one.

^^^ Fire

You'll call the voters dumb, yea dude you're quite the charmer,
Think about it.......
The wordplay is over their heads, but understood by Cot the gardener?

^^^ Cot/quite doesn't really work, not that you're forced to have a 4 syllable scheme but I think that was the intent. Punch was cool, although I'd have liked to see something else to tie in the gardener angle, otherwise it's just a job title that you're implying makes them dumb.

Look fraud, I run with blades, you aint busting tops,
Step wrong and one uppercut'll turn that chin strap into mutton chops.

^^^ Clean. I like it

The teeth tatt? Lame as fuck, cant get it reversed bitch,
If you wanted to carve bites into your skin...you had plenty of verses.

^^^ Reversed bitch/plenty of verses I'm not catching the rhyme. Kind of ruined the bar for me which would have been cool assuming the tattoo is a real personal.

Got all the flavors of led, I'll pull up on you solo,
And squeeze 31 between the numbers like the baskin robbins logo.

^^^ I get the point, but the 31 is squeezed between letters, not numbers.

You're a plebian Cro, I'm above you...I aint sorry,
I'll leave you pushing up daiseys...that your coworkers can maintain for me.

^^^ Aint sorry/maintain fah me... that's a big stretch as far as my "accent" goes. Not sure where you're from so maybe it rhymes well for you. Punch didn't have much sting on it.

I'm in the summer of my youth, you'll get hacked and slashed,
So only way I'm seeing Cro's feet...is with a toe tag attached.

^^^ This was pretty fire. Dope closer

You had two bars that I loved, but you also had a few that didn't even rhyme imo. And a couple misses



Overall I think Swerve had my favorite bar of the battle, but they didn't make up for the rest of the bars that missed or didn't rhyme. Barcotic was pretty well on point the entire time.


Vote - Barcotic.