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Originally Posted by Profit
Imma school this dummy, makin bad investments is why u is bummy
Listen, how u posta handle Profit.. when ur fuckin notorious fa losin, money
^^^ Seems like the obvious flip on your own name. I don't like to call things played unless I've personally seen them a lot, but this has to be played.
I'll abuse ya honey, turn a sweet girl into dudes payin to fuck her
I mean I'll have ya Broad Up in the streets like she was Raised In The Gutter
^^^ meh... nothing really clever here. You're going to pimp his girl... what else?
AR to ya dome, I want the few chips this bitch is saving
So when I bring the sticks out u better come w/the paper.. stupid officiating
^^^ Not bad.
Ur too pussy to square up, so I'll grab anything to ensure u die, b
See I ain't gotta be a supreme boxer to choke u to death w/ur tai chi
^^^ This could have actually been super dope. But boxing/tai chi don't really fit. I know Supreme is a brand, so maybe that's where the punch is coming from and it's over my head. But imo if you said something about martial arts instead of boxing this would have been fire. Still a good punch regardless.
Imma boss hommie, n the way u lost last week means I ain't even tryin
Cos not only is facin me a bold challenge.. but dog u couldn't even beat defiant
^^^ I get the attempt here. And it wasn't bad. But the execution was a little sloppy.
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Seems like a pretty quick written. I wasn't a big fan of a lot of your verse other than the tai chi bar, which was dope.
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Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!!
where yah manners? there's only room for 1 profit on the lime
yah 10's may be good but got AIDS and will die at the drop of a dime
^^^ Wording made this lose impact imo.
I'd knock this dick head out if he ever stood beside me
when I get in this bag, the ambo's gonna put you in yours and then ZUYZ
^^^ Must be over my head. I don't get this.
nigga, I'm known to flip in the ring like Prince Naseem
or I can hit you from long range and put you in a scope like Jimmy Iovine
^^^ Meh in a scope/interscope done to death.
yah bitch fall asleep before you hit cuz you give her twat zzZzz
she say you discharge before you slide in and bust..fuckin cock tease
^^^ Pause. Not but for real I don't even know what happened here. Did you throw a sleeping onomatopoeia in there just for a rhyme? Not a fan.
I'm the slickest, and yah lines is too wishy washy to test my nerve
fair warning, they'll find you N' your bitch in a ditch, respect the curve
^^^ Nah
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I'm not sure if you're from another country or something, and I'm just not familiar enough to catch your punches, but tbh this verse was kind of hard to get through. Need more impact in your punches, and it helps if they make sense.
Vote - Profit. His verse was rushed but it was still a pretty clear victory here.