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Old 12-17-2017, 06:08 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by Captain Neckbeard View Post
Oh I thought u weren't interested in being sophisticated and that verses shouldn't be rated under that standard anyways lol

Ur a great storyteller but I think ur lying if u say ur style is complex in any sense?

All that other stuff u said I literally forgot even happened till u just typed it lol

No shade intended...an I didn't think u disagreed with me ?

I like ur stuff guy lol settle down
lmao I don't think "sophistication" should be a category we judge topical heads on, it's like saying text battlers who use mom/girl lines shouldn't be inducted imho, but that's all subjective of course

I'd argue my style is complex in an entirely different way. Very few write with the dual rhyme scheme I do right throughout my shit.

A, B
A, B
B, C
B, C and so on. And I still tell a good fucking story, even with that high degree of technical difficulty added in. I make it look easy, it isn't. Maybe it's not style you were referring to, maybe it's substance, but since you said style I figured I'd address it as you called it

I can maybe see why some people may be into that depressed pseudo intellectual emo stuff, but it's not my lane. I just like to be entertained when I read something.

Again, it's all subjective I guess, but sophistication shouldn't be the be all and end all deciding factor IMO
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