[Amen]

For the record, I'm going to read For Battlings verse in For Battlings way of reading.

Originally Posted by For Battling

@Innovator

One call & the whole squad pull up. Stop testing my shooters
You’ll see the whole building surrounded by choppers, that’s Wednesday’s at Hooters
Another chopper bar this week, so cool. I hate "THAT" bars tho... This was wack regardless.
I’ll blast u & ur baby. Trust me I’m a rude thug
The Nina’s cute n she’s crazy.. she’ll leave hearts in the air like cartoon love
Ok. Slightly wordy but ok.
It’s Xmas at Inno’s House. His kids’ hearts filled with joy & with glee!
“Santa?” No jit, it’s Z! Then their faces lit up as soon as I opened up the toys by the tree
Wordy but ok again...
Took your girl to Paris, even told my bros they could join
Had da hoe screamin “ahh, wee wee!” as I showed her the Eiffel Tower w/ my boy
Join/boy rhyme? That LIP got your vocab all fucked up, bruh...
I’ll be on ur balcony posted, prone position on the top floor
Then I let them automatics open up as soon as u get close like garage doors
Prone position lol... Lay call of duty much? FAGGOT... Concept was simple and basic... Similes have to be creative & dope and this was not.
Ur girls a hustla. She nvr let’s me get the whole thing wen I thump
Said she’d only let me hit that Premium Spotify paid about 10 bucks a month
Oh look, a SPOT IF I word play again lol... Nah homie, this concept was played the day spotify when viral.

Originally Posted by Innovator

Fuck this clown we don’t understand you you need more attitude
Cuz the funny thing is you honestly believe niggas is laughing with you and not at you.
Had you put more thought/wit in to this it could of landed nicely.
Watch me pull the pound, leaving dead weight on the ground that’s a hint
Cuz when I spark the fifth, ull be 6 ft deeper than the shadow on ur upper lip.
Mehhhhhhh - don't like it.
And yah bitch? I call her sunflower she always spitting seeds out her 2 lips, geez
So when she say she picked up a few things she ain’t talking bout groceries
Nah...
I got yah old girl choking on the gun, that bitch is always ready to blow
So when I say I pulled the rubber grip, that’s just me barebacking the hoe
2 Bars back to back about his girl kills any impact this could've had IF it was dope. Just redundant bro... Try and mix it up a bit.
Fuck holding peace, wild out on yah whole squad, including yah seed and yah baby moms
And yo take it up with god for that face, cuz it’s clear when he added your lips he was playing the odds
Nah...

Inno improving by the week, I see. Just need to use some of his creative talents he uses when writing man poems and formulate insults instead of writing about mother nature, ocean views and inner depression lol. Nah but seriously, add some creativity to your verse Inno with some witty harsh insults and you'll be straight. Zelph still wack but he edged this one out. He had 2 close to decent bars.

v/FOR Battuhlen.