12-15-2017, 05:16 PM
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#6
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As-salamu alaykum!
Join Date: May 2016
Posts: 8,462
Battle Record: 19-8
Champed
- 1-2 Punch League Season 6
Rep Power: 0
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Originally Posted by Infiltration
Me & your wife were in your kitchen:
Said ya sports bars booooring while inf d down her three hours
'He's so predictable!' as i slammed it on the counter like Geese Howard
Ehhhhh, not really feeling this one.
We'll runoff w knights cash. my plan? use poison. die fast
Next time u see ur damselfly i spoiled her before u live out ones lifespan
Had to read this a few times before it clocked but light.
Need a light man? b/c you bringin fire is more than a fantasy
If this a mismatch you're mr gassed....who's completely divorced from reality
Nah..
And when it come to dirt tier jersey trash he's the standard
In ur region i rate u so low growth in-part takes logans healing factor
Not sure what you are trying to say here? Got too much going on for me.
U livin backwards; poor spic grew up on the streets wild
I'll Wachovia.. then takeu2school over a bank account that's creds freestyle
I've always known it to be pronounced WAK, not watch. So this was a reach but the execution was mild too.
Born loser. a mistake parents should've never really made
Cuz allll of Allele's were predetermined by those hereditary traits
Nah...
Get a grade? Only AKA's = forced nameplays he'll use later
You'll Sharon Reed an ugly in-word&&I'd put that 'on aer' - no news anchor
Again, you have way to much shit going on here man... YOu are over complicating your material by doing this and making it hard to enjoy.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Chamber
faggot i'll jump u w/ a pack of wolves that'll drop u colder
depressed bitch my Paxil stomp till the weight of life lifts off ur shoulders
Paxil/Pack'll - sort of a reach man... Like the concept and execution tho.
got the ruger tucked to merk ya team, has a deadly beam
s'like my glasses fogged up, i'll lift my shirt an whip out everything
Simple concept but executed effectively.
u hate on new niggas gettin dubs, they'd smash u punk
it got Intuition he'd win battles but deep down he know's hes wack as fuck
In to wishin, lol nice... I fuck w/ it.
ur a stalker on that eminem song lvl, ur sucha disgrace
i'll give this Stanton of bullets to the grill for stepping up to the plate
Can't give credit for this one now, lol... At least Paxil kind of made sense. Give this stan A ton of...
im dope an ur wack as fuck, wavin a knife by this guys eye
i spit Firestick the blade in ur cornea till it's leakin all over like open wifi
Ehhhhhh sort of like the bar above it.. But this one slightly better.
got this faggot nervous, uzi'll explode in u twat
it'll enter ur skin like a Hypodermic, Chamber will leave u cold ina box
Ok.
ready to cut & hide ya body, faggot u'll get chiseled quick
fuck fightin, i'll stab Infantile a floor over his corpse for being a little bitch
Lol wtf? you are one morbid mother fucker yo...
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Damn, INF fell off. I used to enjoy his shit back when he 1st started battling here. I think he's tooo consumed by his creativity that he gets lost in the shit... Over complicating your concepts makes for a horrible read man. If a voter has to read a bar 8 times before it clocks and he moves on to the next - major turn off. Dumb it down, bro. Not sure of this new style you are trying to craft up but go back to your older style... Much better. Anyways, Allen had better/harsher executions on his verse. Some terrible wording/grammar on a couple of his bars but his executions and concepts were better.
v/Allen Knight
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