[Amen]

Originally Posted by Alvin Karpis

fuckin 16 lol

Time to back it up, I bet you’ll snitch if I whip yo ass enough
This kid is a fake, get rid of the H...you’re a Wrat to us
Simple but dope.
All these dadcees w/ child proof shit, you a pedo so just stop
Only child proof you know is saved to a hidden folder on your desktop
Nah, wack.
Some of the best taught me this shit, I was patient and cutthroat
You just wanted to skip ahead, double dutch and jump rope
Again, simple but nice.
Ya flow is lame, every nameplay you’ll use is known and played
Your shit is light and you’ll break ya arm tryin to throw some shade
Wasn't feeling this.
Last week you got clowned, now this is a replay...
You weren’t just a choke artist, Spree fucked you up worse than PJ
Nah...
All my lines hit direct with disrespect, my shits hot
The closest you’ll come to seeing any bitch in Kar is Vics thot
Lol, ok.
For xmas I even copped an ugly sweater just to laugh and flex
You’re ugly sweater is 275lbs, morbidly obese, and wreaks after sex
Lol, bang.
I got 20/20 vision, no fear in him its clear I win
Your 2020 vision is prayin you make a name for yourself on here by then
Lol, good.

Originally Posted by WRATH

Idgaf about this shit
This aint the justice league so i approach this in an Avenger type manner
i swing that hammer like Thor.. u better get some act right Banner
What are you even saying here?
U got a blockhead like Hawkeye, shit square like a Magnavox
If u Loki Odin I got the Iron Man and that shit could trigger the Ragnarok
You must be a comic book nerd.
Dont u even speak rodent.. and put your head down when i enter the room
If i even hear Alvin Simon Theodore of your rotting corpse will be all anyone remembers of you
This has way to much going on in it. Tone it down a notch, bruh.
You can get robbed by a real rock n roller bruh, trust there's only harm in store for ya
But this aint some bandits 1 man with enough guns to arm the orchestra
Ok, so far this is your best bar but a miss. You could have worded this in a manner that insulted your opponent. As is, it's self hype with no direction.
Got a old sawed off with new age bullets for this lil stan
I hit you with this lil pump you gon be lil peep, thats dead from a lil xan
Nah, lol...
Who you represent dweeb your own gang ought ta spray ya
I'll swing that fucking steel beam over your head like a crane operator
Nah, too simple of a simile bro...
U not a playa, trying to dance W/me well this glock can train ya
Let off the banger, when these shots hit your body start dancin like ayyy....... Macarena
This was corny.
Even when guns are drawn im trading stocks IRA funds and bonds
How are you on? Only times you bitcoin is after shining shoes dude U the underdog
Over worded and wack.

Karp took this with a more polished verse. Better executed punches. Wratch seems like he has the concept of text battling, just needs to focus an dial in on the mechanics. Work on developing concepts in a more effective/harsher manner.

v/Karp