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Old 12-15-2017, 04:45 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by Barcotic View Post
gun bar king? plzzz. stop blowin smoke thru ur clit
so Credulous in here.. i aint naive, i just kno u a bitch
Reach, ending syllable is pronounced as LUS not LOSS.
u pull triggers to help boredom, u aint really about war tho
besides
4 arms couldnt handle this ledge end. consider urself Goro
Ledge end/Legend, nahhhh - bad IMO.
u whimper at weapons, the type to use ur crib for protection ..
but my beam'll hit u on the way to ur car, no Christmas projections
Meh... Not feeling this much at all... Ok so the beam will hit him... Just has no impact to me at all.
maybe u aint hear me tho. u a weary HOE, cleeearly no shotta
n woman, ima leave ur heart on ya box like a Cheerios product
This was ok but light.
wet fast. neck slashed. u've never repped a set, assclown
closest u came to a chop on the corner was in WWF Smackdown
You always have to have at least one wrestling concept in your verse, huh? lol... This was basic but OK.
claim a tough guy life n cant even fuck a rough, wide white ting
if u think this kid gets Kucherov ur rocker & should be struck by lightning
Not feeling this.
ya moms tho? she's actually quite middle aged n fine
I pushed that pink behind her walls further than the insulation guys
This doesn't make any sense to me.
i switch styles every bar, u cant match the steez that ive ushered
truthfully u couldnt have any more up ur sleeve than a Hush shirt
Wack.
shoutout @Victor for the nbl promo vid loll

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Originally Posted by Cred View Post
Keep FORGETTING ur soft n I’ll keep bustin til the blicky broke
50 smoke. These reminders in front of ur face ain’t sticky notes
Ok
The man in this shit! For all that nagging u shud get blamed wit the clips
Bi polar?! Dog it’s called TRANSGENDER wen a man acts like a bitch
This was basic but effective. Nice personal shot at his user title which he's changed - probably after reading your verse.
U’ve avoided the fade since h/s, so don’t act like u’re down to ride
Faggot u been beating around the bush wayyy before u made it ur 9 to 5
Landscaping concepts against him been done. This one is close to one of the dopest ones, tho. Spit had a dope one with him bullyin and shuving snow around, lol.
Bitch I ain’t taking no L, plus I’ll murder this fake n won’t tell
They’ll find Bar floating above water like the lobbies @ Las Vegas hotels
Didn't like this.
Somebody shuda told this goofy that he cud get smoked wit toolies
Creep up. Watch em talk thru the clips like he tryna get to kno the movie
Nah... Wack.
Ignite the piff, what I write is sick, u ain’t as nice as this
Bitch u cudnt black in a verse if u had Aero sit down n write the shit
Nah.
Yeah bro tell me about it, me and my nigs be in clubs hittin hella scenes
But u were on NC 3hrs later?! Dog that’s the fastest fuckin “lit” I ever seen!!
Statement... Nothing much here...
Wat the hell is this foo’ sippin? I can’t help if dudes missin’
This chopper BEEN lookin to lift a body like a rescue mission
Seen this concept way to many times.
Damn, I didn't think Cred stood a chance here coming in to the battle TBR.
Overall I think CRED took this. Barc is Barcs own worst enemy here. I get being creative but you over do it with word play constantly reaching trying to make shit work. It killed you here. Cred started out nice but fell off. He also kept it simple and didn't attempt to be overly creative or complicated with a more direct approach and it was effective.

v/Cred
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