Netcees - View Single Post - Defiant vs DMVsToneB

For Battling · 12-09-2017, 06:43 AM

Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice
If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife
alright, the problem here is that you’re relying solely on the Joyner (Lucas) wordplay to make this bar whole, because the whole frank Lucas thing takes away from the outcome here. For what it is though, the line isn’t bad at all
^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony
Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company
office wp is played, decent punch at best
I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games
Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same
this is a no
Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined..
If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunch line
nah
Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts
Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch
manual is another wp that’s basic & played sir, just think about it, any wp that is even remotely basic such as manual has for sure been done & flipped a ton of times.

Tony: You have the right idea, your wording is pretty good and you aren’t throwing complete misses or anything, just gotta work on being more creative with your concepts & if wordplay is your thing then you have to think of more original shit.

Vs

back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind
punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind
decent
involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya
there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter
lol I liked this
Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit
Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit
could have been better, execution was poor
Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G
When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey
decent
Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B
even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party
this is a no

Defiant: Your verse was better in the sense that you had more creativeness and your hits were better than Tony’s. Your misses were pretty bad and you could work on consistency but you had a decent showing

VOTE: Defiant

12-09-2017, 06:43 AM	#13
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Check my resume fraud, dem savage nights, you aint half as nice If you n ya bitch on that frank Lucas tip, you can Joyner in the afterlife alright, the problem here is that you’re relying solely on the Joyner (Lucas) wordplay to make this bar whole, because the whole frank Lucas thing takes away from the outcome here. For what it is though, the line isn’t bad at all ^^ Thats grown man shit, s' consequence paired with gluttony Def' keep actin that agency im liable to office group of company office wp is played, decent punch at best I smoke kush on a starcraft, quit playin nigga save the games Cuz yea Im sure you got some heat but we dont micro-wave the same this is a no Face it bro, you've been sheltered, isolated, confined.. If Def' was ever chillin in the cut.. he got butted in lunch line nah Defiant, Romo & Cousins.. that trio falls apart like loose blunts Cuz stats wise he mayb top 5 but manual always lose in the clutch manual is another wp that’s basic & played sir, just think about it, any wp that is even remotely basic such as manual has for sure been done & flipped a ton of times. Tony: You have the right idea, your wording is pretty good and you aren’t throwing complete misses or anything, just gotta work on being more creative with your concepts & if wordplay is your thing then you have to think of more original shit. Vs back to basics forcefully..... today is the date your behind punch so many brain cells outta u, u can call it a great weight off your mind decent involved in so many bitch fights, no fool will ever quote ya there's so many tears when the purse split.....hed be a terrible boxing promoter lol I liked this Ya girls gives head to 10s at a time, when u arrive u hit Such a line up for a turn a DMVs, it resembles gettin a driver's permit could have been better, execution was poor Ya sexuality is questionable....i can see it in ya fuckin face G When the only thing a date with Tony awards.....is a night with Kevin Spacey decent Checked ya audios out, n there's no money from the start B even said theyd be 'free for all' n just got muted from a call of duty party this is a no Defiant: Your verse was better in the sense that you had more creativeness and your hits were better than Tony’s. Your misses were pretty bad and you could work on consistency but you had a decent showing VOTE: Defiant