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Mike Wrecka
In my eyes you were definitely the weakest verse in comparison to the rest in the piece.
I don't think it was "bad" but i don't think it was "dope" either.
I was not a fan of the way you structured it with the slashes and shit.
Brag pieces like this i enjoy. I just felt like for a first drop as a new crew it should have been amongst your best work especially since its bragodocio. I would be more forgiving in my feed if you had to do a story or heartfelt piece but all you had to do here was brag about yourself and your crew. An up in complexity scheming wise would have helped.
Bottom line is it came off as too simplistic to me. It was avarage at best. Although someone may differ, but thats my two cents.
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Genocide
Your piece was aight. Below average for what i know your capabilities can craft.
Its on point but content is weaker than i expected. But aye you win some you losw some...im sure you'll come back with a vengeance.
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Vulgar
Tbh i felt you went out in left field here. It was mechanically on point and i know you can write so im not hating but i don't get why u wrote what you wrote. Maby its just over my head. So be it if thats the case but i can't say i dig.
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Objective
I actually liked this verse the best so far because it is schemed much better and demonstrates some complexity. I am obsessed with the technical side of rap so this at least held my attention from start to finish.
Although it did seem like you were rhyming to just rhyme at some points.
Mechanically sound none the less and thus far strongest verse in my eyes(keep in mind im feeding as i read).
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IamBenT
I dug. Seems to finally be heating up. Got a lil swag in this and good balance between simplicity and complexity. I dig.
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Witty
Tie between you and bent for best verse. Flow was dope. Easily spit. Structure was good. Content was ehh but still amongst the strongest here.
Creating an entire army, and we've hired the entire higher part of the hierarchy
^ that was dope i liked that.
Ayo im only one dude but i keep it real and give my opinion. No hate intended. I ain't even tryin to downplay ya'll as competition i just felt ya'll coulda executed this better. I'm sure my feed ain't what ya'll would prefer but take it for what it is and come with that fire next drop.
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