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Originally Posted by For Battling
@ Schadenfreude
I murder vets for fun, they gon need a coffin to cover up the stench
Callin Giant shots.. this McAdoo more than just put washed up niggas on the bench
Cool concept but the execution was ass.
U love retarded heffers. I know the truth there’s no need for pretendin
so get rid of the fetish, or u’ll see ur whole screen red like wen u try to send Silver a msg
Wack.
I’ll be in front of ya house, beam aimin thru ya dang window
Wen I raise arms it triggers the fire, then the whole buildin’ bursts into flames.. that’s Kane’s intro
I hate these types of punch attempts. "THATS A (Insert PUN)"... Cringe shit...
Get merked by plenty of jabs..or I’ll just unload some slugs on this fag
Then u’ll get 6 to the bottom when I open up.. it ain’t a video mag
Light.
Met ur fiancé. Won her heart over with laughter..I’ve nvr seen u madder
U’ll get ur woman took by a white dude w/ an ugly nose, that’s Wedding Crashers
Ugh... Peep feed on your LAST "THATS" attempt. Same shit... This one was just wacker. |
OVERALL; Have seen better from you... TOP TIER, eh? This is hardly MID BOTTOM TIER QUALITY, fam? Wassup? Nah but for real - I've seen better from you... IDK if you just rushed this because you were hyped and anxious to get your bars off or what - just didn't seem like you spent much time on this... Conceptually was weak and your executions were mild to wack... MacAdoo bar had potential but your execution was soft... I would have taken a different route with that concept.
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Originally Posted by Schadenfreude
Fore warning - all out when I’m housing shit, that’s foreclosing,
4-5th it’s for loading, u’ll go from For Battling to forgotten, that’s foreboding.
Stupid.
A sad sack stay getting exposed on the board, you mad wack..
everyday ya have a another slip in the Disc, developed a helluva bad back.
Played concept with a played angle/flip on the execution... Think you could have done better with this one, tho.
Don’t you have a kid? ‘Stead of try’na battle write, be a dad alright
I’d kidnap yo faggot tike, then aim the beam on ya World w/o a satellite.
This was light.
Yo babymom a true whore, comes thru when she in the mood for..
cowgirl on my dick til her poon sore & u still let her swing back like saloon doors.
This was ok, I guess.
Have the biscuit scramble ya egg cuz u ignored the warning still
something hot pour & fill, yo personalized mug while u eat yo morning meal.
Light...
..body.
Not really...
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OVERALL; I have seen better from you... This was light and I'm sure you didn't spend much time on this... I like the SWAG & FLOW style and delivery you typically drop but for the most part you always throw a few bangers in there. This one didn't really have anything that stand out to....
v/Shade - barely... Both verses were light to me... Nothing impressive out of either - Shade's delivery is smooth and carried him here.