Barc u're simultaneously creative & corny asf lol. Let Me explain - most of the time, your wordplay is highly effective, but it's not always natural. By that I mean, the greatest wordplay can be said out loud & still work. A good portion of your wordplay reads awkward & is even worse if I recite it out loud. Just an observation, that you obv dgaf about, cuz many ppl have already told you that. Anyway, you still won cuz Karp is rustier than Genocide's car. The concepts were there yet very underdeveloped, but like I said, I assume that's due to rust..VOTE BARCOTIC.
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Last edited by Schadenfreude; 12-06-2017 at 04:01 PM.
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