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Old 05-24-2013, 09:51 AM   #4
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If you keep producing pieces like this my feed is going to be damn near identical each time.
I will say i see a better attempt at creativity in this and a slightly better piece mechanically.
Its kind of annoying to keep reading the title "real nigga" "realer nigga" "cold nigga"
In my eyes that shows either laziness or lack of creativity. I'm not sure which is the case here.
Come up with some attention grabing titles.

The whole im santa's dick line was lame.
I did enjoy the rhyme mechanics of the clock tics cock pit line. Decent.

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