The concept of your piece was decent but the execution was meh. And; ''Infact i'm santa's dick in christmas'' <-- wtf was that? The wording was wack in that ''narnia''-line as well, Narnia and closet-fans ish is played as fuck too. The semen freezes & popsicle line was lulzworthy, but overall I didn't really enjoy it. Was short and seemed rushed.
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