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Geno · 11-02-2017, 07:47 AM

So inno had the brutal display of vividry that i really liked and seemed to enjoy in this battle.
Not my typical lean towards when it comes to overal execution and style here but i rly dug this verse a lot. The opener was like whatttttt!?!?!? And i was immediately wanting to read more of the same type of visual writing.

Ullr a little less visual but the flow of course solid and this is the type of verse i lean towards typically. Thought you both went at this in a similar fashion making for a rather ddissapointing approach, so cliche. BUTTTT the best thing inno had GOING FOR HIM TBH WAS THAT HE dumpED FIRst. Not that that matters sry bout the caps text. But i think his ability to wow me visually overshadows ullrs ability to flow smoothly. Once again in this tourny i fins myself voting more for the story and visuals than for the actual mechanics and flow of things. Which tbh isnt genos norm considering i flow through my entire verses for the most part as did ullr. This is hard to caLl boys but i have to go innovatorn here. Peace.

11-02-2017, 07:47 AM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	So inno had the brutal display of vividry that i really liked and seemed to enjoy in this battle. Not my typical lean towards when it comes to overal execution and style here but i rly dug this verse a lot. The opener was like whatttttt!?!?!? And i was immediately wanting to read more of the same type of visual writing. Ullr a little less visual but the flow of course solid and this is the type of verse i lean towards typically. Thought you both went at this in a similar fashion making for a rather ddissapointing approach, so cliche. BUTTTT the best thing inno had GOING FOR HIM TBH WAS THAT HE dumpED FIRst. Not that that matters sry bout the caps text. But i think his ability to wow me visually overshadows ullrs ability to flow smoothly. Once again in this tourny i fins myself voting more for the story and visuals than for the actual mechanics and flow of things. Which tbh isnt genos norm considering i flow through my entire verses for the most part as did ullr. This is hard to caLl boys but i have to go innovatorn here. Peace. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est* Last edited by Geno; 11-04-2017 at 11:05 AM.