[Spoken]

I'm am a very distinct writer and as it goes with that comes the ear for the ultimate mechanics of one's verse. Both had the same approach and aspect of the picture which to me was cliche. None the less both had they're up and downs on the verses submitted. Inno with with a more abstract imagery of the pic and let it loose but the flow seemed choppy and made it for a quite an annoyance read to me. Having to find the flow and style towards reading it off.. came true spoken word status though which that aspect I respect so I get the gist of the off flow of counts. The overall aspect of the piece was clear and well converged. Ullr I haven't read much from you but the mechanics are there.and you present a style that is delectable honestly. You came.more raw with the action of the war zone and led us through but the wording to.me killed me here and there that I felt retracted from the essence of the verse. Story well portrayed and understood as well.

both came direct and the same way in a sense but honestly felt the approach could have been presented more desirable and with the verses given I felt both rushed to submit this. When it comes down to it I have to give the edge towards Innovator for a more clean transition through out the story.