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Old 10-11-2017, 05:57 AM   #2
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i typed up a huge reply to this and my work internet went down

the hanging rhymes in the beginning threw me off a little

its only been a year, i still remember your face was dope to me though

digital youth was a great millennial turn of phrase, i liked the billie jean jacket reference as well for the nostalgia of it. the two worked well together even if they contrast each other in my view

i loved 'masterpieces written on scraps of receipts' because i still do that very same thing to this day if an idea comes to me quickly and i want to get it down, very relatable

apple trees and rotary blades was another great turn of phrase for me, almost a contrast again in how closely related the two things can be yet one of them insistent on tearing the other apart. perfect visual illustration for the kind of spiteful bad relationship said in so few words. i loved it.

great to have you back.

keep that pen moving!
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