I don't really have much to say about either verse, I don't care about politics and I don't know who the fuck that actor is lol.
diode's verse almost pushed the "too long" on some lines but just managed to keep in check for me, had some multis and a feeling to them that I'm a fan of, but there were a couple places I wish he had placed an "of". last line... not sure. it felt weak to me, but I might be missing something about labor?
pinot's verse was mostly on point, again a couple places that I think a "filler" word could have really announced the flow and still read perfectly. even though I don't know who the actor is, I understood most the references, except the last line, which again, felt weak (but probably cuz I don't know the reference).
ehhh, mvgt pinot
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