I'm still gonna vote on this even if it is closed.
Split: Good writing here. It was kind of a long build up though that I felt kinda dragged in parts. The positives were it was poetic and kept me entertained.]
Tyson: You came with a good piece too. The negatives to your post really was that it was just too short for my taste. It needed more length to make a better story you know? But the positive was it was good writing man just not long enough to win.
V/Split
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