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Originally Posted by symetrik
someone touched on my grammar, maybe it was ullr. I know there's no ONE way for text to be "correct", but I'd love additional input on the question of what makes a piece come across through text, etc.
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sym I'm going to do some videos on the subject coming up, you had a really fucking dope verse man, just some little things to tweak to improve
think of how you say your verse, add punctuation to make the verse read exactly like you say it, read it out loud try different ways and experiment, that makes a difference.