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Old 05-22-2013, 06:33 PM   #4
Mike Wrecka
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ya bent. this was pretty awesome. it had a mellow vibe. or at least that's how I internalized it. it was soothing almost as I read it. really enjoyed it. you had good mechanics here and very adept use of multis. which is my thing. why rhyme one word when you can rhyme two or three. makes shit just sound so much better. I actually like this verse better than the wolf and women one you posted in the champ match. and I really liked that one. good work my dude. pz.
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