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Old 05-22-2013, 06:30 PM   #6
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ya this was pretty cool. good work guys. genocide and king keiths verses were real dope. endsane was decent. your bars are a bit too long for my liking but overall you did your thing. natural I gotta say your verse lacked a bit. I don't wanna come off like a dick for saying that , but im just keepin it real. it doesn't mean your not a great writer cause honestly ive never read anything from you nat, but you didn't come to the others level on this go round. you guys shouldn't have opened with that verse.

re reading king keiths verse I have to mention it again. damn keith that shit was epic. fully quotable.

with all that being said. cool piece. I enjoyed it. good work. thanks for the read.
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