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Old 05-22-2013, 01:35 PM   #6
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it..defeats the purpose..the leads are worthless
the dance is the same..so is the world kid
^Damn. Nice.
The other guys have said the same thing and I've said the same thing to you plenty of times, write a longer piece man. You get us into this piece and then it just ends. No bueno. You've got some nice skills man I just only wish your pieces were longer.
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