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Old 08-03-2017, 10:08 AM   #4
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Listened to slump..
Couple things i picked on early.
A: your a horrible rapper
B: your vocals were low
C: refer back to a: idk what you doing over the beat. If that shit was intentional or not.. It seemed like at certain moments you may have been on beat but other moments i was like wtf man
D: the beat was tough tho..you know what.. Based on the tough beat ill give benefit of doubt.. And go peep the next track in hopes that its better and this was some experimental shit. Brb

And look. Im not being a dicm to be a dick. I WANT YOU TO KEEP WORKING. But answer me this..

Do you really think that was good?
Didnt listen to any other ones.
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