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Old 08-01-2017, 01:16 AM   #4
Mr. J
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Impressive work in such a short display
the bubble gum/subtle scum was funny fun.
otherwise I felt that you could add to this.
display your printing & how its written up.
either way I enjoyed that whole midsection
awkward work near the end though...
a perfect blend of idea and the prophesied
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