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Old 08-01-2017, 12:50 AM   #12
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This was a very smooth read from the start.
The way you simply weave your pattern is very impressive.

Orson Wells the futuristic. eucalyptus, bloom sickness
cue another new conviction. mood swing like superstition
superficial surface stain upon your existence
hungover jury noose addition. call in your witness
call me. just.. call me. listen.

^^^^^
that whole section right there was very smooth
noose addition/eucalyptus that whole thing was great.
admirable work, I dont know what else to say that hasnt been said.
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