I mean. The style of it feels right. But none od the words are working.
Some peopke just aint meant to 9write battle bars. Ive never been much of a battle bar writer. I can identify dope lines and judge battles with the beat of them.. But could neber put a really "dope" verse together. This just isnt good lyrically. Smh
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