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Old 05-22-2013, 12:10 AM   #2
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Dry docks finding hiding spots to push downstream
Or to populated lots where these ears don't hear loud screams
Now I redeem at the ATM what bloody hands fiend
And warm water provides washing away convicting scene


^^^^^^^
thought that little section was fire
actually I enjoyed the whole thing
the flow was on point and the vibe matched your style
nice work all around I think, I haven't read much from you
but you have garnered my interest...keep up the pennage
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