If I'm honest, spoken word is something that passes me by a bit, but this was very emotive. I could imagine you speaking this, walking around saying this out loud, and as the above says, I'd like to be able to see your emotions, and see whether they're what I'm picturing. This was a really deep exploration of real life and emotions. I think in terms of expression you pulled off what you were trying to in that sense, a way of expressing this particular aspect of your life and the emotions that they made you feel. Great writing.
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