I liked the title and the way you played it out at the end. I think I'm missing a lot of what's happening in the verse, like the references, some of which I picked up, but others I didn't. I got some of the artist/album references, but maybe missed others. The flow was real nice. Some of it really hit the spot. "Acting like/acolyte" "gorilla apes/vanilla tapes" were real smooth. You opened with a journey with no mission at hand - was that a double meaning, of this verse is just a wandering see where it takes you plus a nod to real life? It laid the right tone and this verse was pretty sweet throughout.
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