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Old 07-01-2017, 04:23 PM   #16
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Predominant Archetypes exhibited by veritas line by line:

Yelling "kinninigan" at the wake of Finnegan,
google the reference to prove you're a simpleton.
The Know-It-All-Trickster
Magician: Expose the conditioning of lies you're living in,
and thus testifies your excuses are useless for giving in.
Too glib for Trickster; This is The Dummy
Dick her down sure, but get her wet first from listening
praise and compliment her amazing opulence, riveting.
The Mama's Boy
Lover: She ejaculates first, let the nookie wookie win,
sanctify the spiritual marriage, never live in sin.
The addicted Lover
to battle V is you thinking illogically and broken,
spit flames to leave your skin black, Token.
The coward
Warrior: Fear transmuted to courage against any foes opposing,
the right hand of righteous justice, and every enemy knowing.\
The hero
Rule with Wisdom, never schmooze with fools never growing.
Chess not checkers, so every one of my lectures is a clever showing
The King: Bring the template of maturity through smoothly flowing.
The weakling prince

Here we see ONE mature archetype (lover) and at that it is exhibited in an undeveloped form. The psyche exhibited by this poem is clearly at the hero stage. You are close, Keep it up.
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