I kinda feel that your opening bar was like a challenge that you threw down to whoever reads this. Like, "Are you smart enough to understand this verse? I don't think so!" which is a pretty bold move really to make at the beginning of your verse. The whole verse really was a lifting up of yourself while putting others down quite condescendingly, which fits in with your on-line persona at the moment.
Most of the verse was a fairly standard flex, but I thought your opening was very provocative so I think you pulled that off well.
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