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Old 06-26-2017, 11:58 AM   #10
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1 - this sounded really nice, the chops were clean. It was well put put together but it does sound a bit like of a paint by numbers on-line beat. It sounds like what you'd find alot of if you're trawling sites like Soundclick for a beat. It was well put together, but it did sound a bit generic.

2 - I liked what you did with this. I think you made really good use of the sample. The beat was a bit funny to me. Like, I'd struggle to rap over it. But musically this was really good.

3 - the intro was probably the best bit, but I woulda liked the actual verse bit to have a bit more musically. The intro felt like a solid base but one that needed to be built on. The drums were a bit experimental and I'm not quite sure if they worked totally.

4 - A nice intro and the hook was really good. The chops for the verse didn't quite sound right for me. They jumped about a bit too much, but the hook was much better. The vocal samples worked well in the hook.

Tough one to call really, but I think that 2 was the most consistent and the most complete sounding, bringing together the samples and the chops and beats and making the best use of them imo.
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