Adonis- nice verse. Good representation of an angel rebelling, well that's what I got out it. Angels are said to be jealous of humankind because we are given choices in life and even if we make the wrong one we can still be forgiven, but they can't. Pretty much that's the image u painted in my mind. Did it very well too.
Split- tbh u lost this before I even read it. The shortness leaves no room for content from the get, not that verse that presented wasn't a good read. Not much to say.
VOTE/ADONIS
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