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Old 01-08-2017, 10:14 PM   #10
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Word this ain't even close. vote coup

Coup/ dope piece. Clean flow. Interesting concept. great wording. I will be honest, some of the wordplay did little for the piece. Don't get me wrong it was done well but it drew too much attention to itself without reinforcing the piece as it should.

Jesodist/ great another self referential verse. I feel for stuff like this to work it has to be creative or at least interesting. This was neither. This was not a topical, this was an overimaginative shit talking.

Initial decision stays. Coup showed more with less and jed showed more is less.
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