Cool battle. I enjoyed Maximus verse more than Sammy's.
The second segment was my favorite, and I liked the 4 roads idea you went with. I feel like it was just a better verse over all, including how much I personally enjoyed it, mechanics, flow, etc..
Reading Sammy's opening lines, I thought it would be followed by a very solid verse with a fresh spin on the topic but I was kind of let down. The verse was decent, but I feel like you could brush up on your mechanics a bit. I look forward to reading more of your stuff
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