Insane, straightforward take of the topic. Social political take with consistency mechanics. Bonus that you didn't have any misses but the lack of hard hitting impacting lines was a detriment. Still a safe angle executed decently.
2000, your rhymes are getting better but still the same issues present as I remember in the past. Lack of content direction and straying too far from the topic to really be able to justify. Your direction is very inconsistent to me, I was not feeling this particular verse.
+1 IV
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