[2tripple0]

yeah this was a good battle you both came with similar verses anyways heres how i broke them down.....

The moment they died, if they opened their eyes,
do you truly think they'd see the scope of our lies,
how do you cope with spreading hopeless demise?
Whole buildings flattened cover all you can see with your mind,
children in disbelief stare unaware of what happened.
There's people dying of starvation in the streets of Yemen,
they'll be clips of allied bomb strikes wiki-leaked in remembrance,
or of soldiers of misfortune, some futures bleak in a semblance.

right i liked that bit really showed you what it was like to be in like a horrible background i guess you kind of gave me the idea that shit wasnt worth the attention you were trying to recieve it was nice but a strange way of saying that theres stuff out there that needs to be recognized if you get me there fact that no there really shouldnt be some kid in Yemen or wherever starving..... you get me every man deserves three meals a day campaign...


right anyways the rest of hte verse.... i liked it the problem is a lot of the piece was ammendable and worthy of praise but at the same time they knew they couldnt figure it out they were screwed that was the point they didnt know how to proceed to like fix these peoples horrible lives in these horrible settings where you cant fix or remedy you get me that was the problem this background of this piece was interesting and i enjoyed it more than i thought..... anyways ya competitor nigmas verse homeboy...

lets see how to percieve this lol heres a quote of a bit of it......see what i can pull from it......


Believe I’m heaven sent. Sure, cowards usurped us
The only prerequisites were power and purpose
Left them headless men, and dead denizens are worthless
Crimson specks of wetness that I shower the Earth with
The more sour I’m turning, more my power emerges
Now my valiant vows to servants are devoured by urges
Former man of empathy, now homeyness consumes my head
Performances at weddings having orgies with the newlyweds


eh i think you kind of stretched it or pulled it off a bit off it was nice i enjoyed the flow there didnt seem to be anything wrong with the direction you were taking it or seemed to have not completely explained anything in full detail..... like the fact that this story didnt have a background whereas the previous one did.... hmm.. it was nice flow i admit i enjoyed the theme of a like a strong background which helps or doesnt im not sure all the time... anyways the piece was nice cause you walked away it was like you were finished with it before you really even had a chance to describe the background because you cant tell that the flow was so rich.... i dont know about you but i think this is what got me and why i think im going to vote for the first verse because you knew you knew that even with this rich flow it wasnt going to be possible to escape the horrors and you werent given enough time......... ehhh i know im being harsh and usually i would have voted for a verse like yours instead of some kid who has been abused and other awful things have happened..... in fact i like that about your verse but in truth and reality i really enjoyed the background of the first verse even though it wasnt something i expected to happen.... anyways there it is thats my vote i hope its enough and good luck to both of you im sorry if anyone is hurt by this vote i am not trying to hurt anyone.... but good luck to both of you in the rest of the week of the league and see you both hopefully for the next one.... good luck all around the board i enjoyed both verses i really could have gone for either one you both did well and i am forthcoming to find out what the rest of the people are going to say about this battle....... good job guys see ya later..