[Adonis]

Jez- it's not stinged by warts, past tense, stung. Also I'm not positive, but it's a quart of blood, quartz is a type of rock or some shit. OK, so after all that shit, you would think you would mention rules and how coup.stepped out of them. Something of that sort to tie in the topic, but nope. This verse was mad comical though, I don't fully understand it, but that doesn't matter because I feel it was made for a deeper reason. The unspoken rules of sportsmanship shall not be bent? Either way, you approached the concept in good fun, but it's strange your standing up for Jay. I appreciated seeing my name in there given that only three were mentioned, that's an ego thing, hence the name. In any case, topical wise, OK verse. Entertainment wise, highly enjoyable because I took the entire read as a joke and I enjoy the lighter side of topicals.

Coup - hmmmm. The flow, after it picked up, which was a third the way in, flowed effortlessly imo. The poetical imagery was lovely, makes me want to write my verse again, with a different format. Anyways, I enjoyed the read. I don't fully get the concept. The bean portion in the end was dope, vivid, but I'm not sure about the woman you speak of, the alien being. I haven't made sense of it yet. I read it again, it's about a girl, whose different then her peers. Is happy while lost in her mind. The sick bird portion was more revolution, meaning, shes sad about the fact she's different and on her own. Dope image, I can literally draw you a picture of a rose budding next to a withered tree with a bird in it gazing down at the Rose.


V. Coup

His verse was far shorter, but the meat to his kick started my thinking, where Jez verse zoned me out like a movie. Both good styles, one I enjoyed more