maximus
It all happened in a flash, calamity struck
Peals of thunderous sounds from cannons and guns
i liked that couplet. nothing special about it but, just good wording & a solid multi. kind of reminded me of how I set my lines up, which, makes you awesome in my book. verse was cool, really nailed the topic (a lot better than Adonis)
Adonis verse reminded me of a verse I did a while ago, although not as good as mine. (true story). Verse was solid though bruh, it was actually a really enjoyable read. I enjoyed reading it a lot more than Maximus verse but, I don't see how it fit the topic.
Very confusing battle for me to vote on, on one hand, Maximus had a decent verse that was on point with the topic. Adonis had a good enjoyable verse which I thought didn't have much to do with the topic. I dunno how I feel about straying away from the topic, kind of defeats the purpose of having a topic driven league, but whatever.. For now, Im'a have to give it to the more enjoyable read.
vAdonis
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