Mister J that life alert line wasn't bad at all imo. The gran torino wasn't too shabby as well, ive just seen it before. Read some matces to get a feel on cleverness & whatnot for your bars. Defeat lines, cum so hard lines, stuff like that stand clear from.
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Destroyer Harley Quinn line just about won this. Rest verse wasn't your best, but got the job done.