Maximus - this was a great little piece. you really did a lot in a short amount of space, and gave the image a tragic twist. I enjoyed how you dove briefly into the history of gypsies, although it may have been an adlib because I've never heard gypsies were from Egypt. perhaps a play on the sounds of both words? anyways, nice work!
Adonis - enjoyed this work of satire. definitely pokes fun at the so called, "cellular zombie," nation we live in. It is getting a bit ridiculous! Anyway, you started off very strong and explained yourself rather well afterwards. I did particularly enjoy the "snap chat back fat" bit, that was funny and also toyed with the fact negative social media posts receive the most attention. you could have related to your picture more.
mvgt - Maximus for hitting his image better.
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