Shit's like a Fight Night battle..
Anyway tho VOTE DESTROYER even tho there's many-a-problem w/ both of these verses: Des 'back down', 'smile' doesn't rhyme w/ 'Glasgow'. The pronounciation's GO, not COW. Everything else was cool, not crazy, but very solid. As for you, Mr. J..smh. First u started w/ a concept that I used when I first started text battling, then u proceed to write a succession of vague, nonsensical lines that I legit can't qualify as punches. YOU HAD A DEFEAT LINE..WTF!? Man that verse damn near gave Me an aneurism.
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Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.
Last edited by Schadenfreude; 12-30-2016 at 04:34 PM.
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