Cred - opener, barbarian (even though the wording was bad), faceoff, bulldog
Schad- linecook, extra cred (if I'm gonna give cred the barbarian bar I gotta give schad this joint), divvy bike, wife swap
Schad, you've gotten pretty far with your concepts cause your wording is screwed bro. You need to figure out a way to get the punch across with less words. Cred I'm pretty sure every line was a Gunbar. I think you had 3 that weren't. I like gunbars but that's a lot.
I got Cred taking this cause Schads wording hurt him.
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