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Jayson Fresh's Verse
act hard naah u'sa pussy hoping for escape
smacked so hard palm readers predict u shook nigga Its written all over your face
aiyo I get mad respect no doubt Im soaring above him
If u deserve a pat on da back its reported to HR for inappropriate touchin'
But I hope u prepared well.. trained hard.. to freshen those punchlines..
We saw how you blew against Aero and still u bring a poisonous dart to a gun fight?
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Jay u had nice concepts, but your wording/execution is fucking up yo punches. The opener did no damage, 'wet blanket' was potentially crazy, had the wording been smooth & wtf does furl mean? Anyway decent drop, just get that wording across better.
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Barcotic's Verse
ur a contender without wins of importance why?
last time we saw Jayson suit up..
.. he wore a red outfit when it's morphin' time
this battle's over. ur claim to fame is moot
when it comes to Jay/me, Oliver viewers will say I ate his food
u BIN broke cuz of ur bimbo, fraud whore
that beast eats thru ya green quicker than a Flintstones lawnmower
if u think anything's a front, ur failing in assumption
get lifted off ur feet when the beam hits u, no alien abduction
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Almost didn't quote Jaime Oliver, but it did hit, even tho it's corny & moot/food don't rhyme. Inferno match could've been crazy w/ better wording. Fraud whore/lawnmower rhymes, but the overall bar was choppy phonetically & 'bust your chin' wack. The other two bars were just misses.
BARCOTIC edges, Jay just didn't bring his punches across well, while Barc was somewhat corny overall, but the punches that landed, hit heavy.