Quote:
Originally Posted by fathead
A losing streak... you suck Its not farfetched/
You Know Your Shitty If Bleak Says Your Bars Stretched/
Statement
So The Skull Your Sportin Must Be Hollow And Empty/
Cuz Head Will Bring It To You Like Ed Norton With.Envy/
Miss
Tempt Me And Ill Send You To See Your Dead Friends/
Theyll Say "Life Is A Double Sided Coin Flip And Head Wins"/
No
Plus, I Know What People Must be Thinking/
An Undeveloped Style Like Yours Is Just Puerto Rican/
Statement
Your Worse Than Bleak N When It Comes.To.Cruchtime/
Just Pm Me Dawg And Ill Write You A Punchline/
Bleak comments are getting old and this is a statement
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I feel you have started similar to how most new comers do, you need to look at the concepts and execution, I think everything you said was a statement except one concept I have no idea about (the envy line - not sure how that would be insulting even if I got it) and another which was about you winning, which rarely works...read other peoples votes and battles and you will get a feel for whats good and what isnt
Quote:
Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz
God forbid u take back food chubby here gets violent furious,
Only time fat free from eating ANYTHING is when this faggit ever takes his diet serious.
meh didn't really like this wasn't worded to well
You don't got moves or game Pimp all ur shit played & wrong,
Last time Head sprung his 'body in a club' he dislocated a shoulder dancing to LL Cool J's Song.
lol you won this battle already funny line
So Fuck def Jam im outside sparkin heaters & Holding Nines,
One Punch kill everything in Fat Farm quicker then THAT Old Bootleg Clothing Line.
I liked this but couldn't be cleaner
When I write my lines they go deep & leave you thinking
Faggot whenever your lines go deep is cuz your Homo ass enjoys going fishin.
what?
You A Snitch & the Chrome im packin will make any type of Liar vanish,
Cuz this bitch Surf the Web Quicker then a random beach guy & spider fetish!not feeling
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Rican won by having a lot better misses, however this was a pretty awful battle I know rican can bring more but probs didn't think he needed too, which after reading fats verse I agree
Vote Rican