Eminem
I feel like your piece was on point with the topic although slow at first it picked up and you had some cool wording imagery scattered about. Your story was cool bro, I enjoyed the way you told a descriptive story, you built dope imagery and kept the topic well. I def enjoyed this one
2trip
This was good. This time you kept it coherent through out the entire verse and I was able to decipher a pretty told tale. Your on the cusp of taking your writing to the next level. You have the tools. This time tho I feel like though the twist on the topic was good. Some parts of your verse lacked.
Overall
Good battle but I got mmlp 2trip was nice but mmlp takes this one.
Vote mmlp
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