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Adonis: Dope written as always. I really enjoyed the read and I think both you and me knows that you should listen to the words you convey in your own piece. You're the fallen angel and you got to understand that without humans there wouldn't be no heaven and hell, just counterparts that doesn't really have any reason to fight. Are you a human or a God? Only you can answer that question. But as a neutral Kratos that has a refound appreciation of peace unless balance is destroyed all I got to say is this; truly enjoyed your piece. You manage to see several viewpoints by writing this ish in a stylish fashion with a ridiculous flow and verbiage that doesn't go to waste on petty things, the focus is in sync with your sentences that eventually shows the madness you've presented to us. The topic is on point and I look forward to read more from you.

Split: I had to look up the word sinusoidal as I started reading your piece. Goddamn, what a fitting fucking word you managed to lubricate your verse with. The rest of your verse (in lack of a less repetitive word) shows even more awesomeness to the poetic piece of brilliance you display to your readers. It was simply beautiful to read. I'm not even fucking around. That was pure excellence and I hope you show it to someone some day, heck, keep it on your phone and show it to some girl when a party withers because I'm sure it'll get you to heaven. You define the term ''less is often more'' with this piece, and I enjoyed every fucking re-read of it.

Vote: BOTW. No doubt. It was beautiful. I try not to be a coming off as a fucking faggot right now but it simply was amazing to read and as an admirer in the art of writing I could tell this was an educated battle of what rhyming really is. But who should I go for? The excellency of writing in rapform or pure perfection with less words? I'm tripartied. The angels on my left and right are looking at me for advice fellas.

Reading everything again and enjoying it just as much as I did at the first time around my vote goes to Adonis on this one as it felt more complete as a whole. Split; Post it in the OM and I'll give it a HoF nomination.