Reading your piece Frank always seems like a chore. You do too much. But you have a knack for imagery and probably one of the best storytellers on this site. Maybe only Zygote and Vulgar are better. But Zygote is a robot, and Vulgar is well Vulgar.
Legion, this was okay. It wasn't as bombastic as Frank's, in a sense because it wasn't as outgoing as Frank's. So it had a better effect neurologically on my brain, as I began to perceive the sensory inputs from the writing, composed of the letters and words that are used to form its images . So its easier to take it in. This had to do partially with presentation, Frank's piece was as usual a gigantic mess.
But, the guy writes in a very nuanced way and wins this pretty easily.
Vote: Frank
|